Monday 28 March 2016

Looking Sadly Out of Windows by Sarah Courtauld

Looking Sadly Out of Windows by Sarah Courtauld (BBC Opening Lines 2013) Wendy Booth - Portrait Artist

Friday 27 February 2015

Jackals by Silvia Moreno-Garcia

Jackals by Silvia Moreno-Garcia (The Big Click)

I have recently discovered a fondness for Noir Fiction. Possibly, I always liked it, but I never gave it a name. There is a place just one twist away from mainstream - for me this includes the absurd, slipstream, a hint of paranormal, and of course noir. This new penchant led me to The Big Click, tor.com and Apex Magazine so keep tuned for more of the surreal but plenty of other stuff too.

We are a few paragraphs into Jackals before we learn Lila and Gregory are cousins, whether by accident or design I had already felt an intimacy and assumed a much closer relationship, so we now have a strong hint of incest. The relationship between Gregory and the unseen Herschler feels equally dark. And then there's the job the squeamish Gregory has been assigned - his part in the road-kill project.

The narrative is compelling and I was drawn through to the end via some unexpected turns. Graphic descriptions feed all our senses throughout however, I found the end waned a little. I would have enjoyed a more solid conclusion. Wendy Booth - Portrait Artist

Friday 20 February 2015

Labyrinth by Amelia Gray

Labyrinth by Amelia Gray (The New Yorker)

The word 'labyrinth' has always been one of those magical words that has a special draw for me, so any story with this title is guaranteed to grab me.

Having paid very little attention during Classics lessons, I am ashamedly unfamiliar with Greek Mythology. Although there is more than a strong hint to Hellenic myth in the first line, I was still unaware that Labyrinth is based on the myth of Theseus until I read John McElwee's interview with the author. If you are better read in the Classics than me, then you may see more to this story than us mortals.

The reader is dropped straight into Dale's backyard and the festivities of his annual 'Pumpkin Jamboree'. We are thrown images and colourful dialogue making the characters and setting immediately recognisable. Gray manages to break the rules of maximum-number-of-characters-for-a-short-story with grace by giving each a distinct face and avoiding naming them until necessary.

The use of 1st person narration gives the impression of a single POV but we are led through the story from Dale's POV as much as the protagonist. This is executed skilfully and at no moment are we uncomfortable with the switch.

I love the little changes of mood that inject humour into dark patches, such as the townie's reaction to his girlfriend letting his hand go. We soon become aware that this is the story of a journey - the physical walk to the centre of the labyrinth (not maze!) and the discovery of our protagonist's past humiliation and his attempt at resolution. The mix of dark drama and a biting wit keep the reader hooked to the end. To those who know the myth, the end may not be a surprise. For me, it left a mark.

I am aware that I may have missed some vital references, having not read the original myth. But, having read this beautiful rendition, I do feel the need to locate the original add it to next week's reading list.